Comments : Existing as a Drop of Water

  • 18 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    This rhyming scheme was great it was if you were really a drop of rain. i love how you personificated it truly awesome
    Take care
    HS

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    Wow, amazing...from beginning to end! i especially liked the part where you said that all you really liked was the fall and the exciting drop from the sky.
    please keep writing and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
    *AntiSocial16*

  • 18 years ago

    by mely

    It's kinda funny