Slashing at my pain

by Krysten   Mar 8, 2006


You had you chance
its much to late
shut your mouth
accept your fate

i cant see your tears
i cant hear you screams
everything around me
feels like a dream

i take out my blade
no its not for me
i lock the door
a throw away the key

i slash at your body
again and again
i loved you before
but this is now not then

my hatred for you
runs ever so deep
as i cut away at you
i don't make a peep

then once I'm all done
and my pains gone away
I'll lock you in my closet
for another day

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  • 18 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Yeh i thort it was good....structurly good n evrythin...bit scary lol but rili gd! i liked it, jess xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I think this was okay....just okay. You should upper case your i's and add punctuation like cant should be can't etc. Also is it I throw away the key? I couldn't feel much from this poem. I'm sorry I don't mean to sound so mean. PLease don't take it that way.

  • 18 years ago

    by Watchmeburn

    Good poem. I liked it.

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