Good poem. I liked it.

I think this was okay....just okay. You should upper case your i's and add punctuation like cant should be can't etc. Also is it I throw away the key? I couldn't feel much from this poem. I'm sorry I don't mean to sound so mean. PLease don't take it that way.

Yeh i thort it was good....structurly good n evrythin...bit scary lol but rili gd! i liked it, jess xxx