Don't ask me..

by Luke   Mar 8, 2006


Crazy, confused..
Not alright..
Stop asking me..
Leave me tonight..

I\'m not ok..
I\'m not fine..
But my business..
Is mine..

Don\'t ask about..
The cuts on my wrist..
No matter how much..
The old me you missed..

I\'m not gonna change..
It wont be better..
I\'ll only tell you why..
In my suicide letter..

Until you find..
What\'s really wrong..
Don\'t ask me every..
Time i walk along..

© of Luke/Tuffguypr 8th March 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Awesome, Luke! I can feel the pain your words create. Such raw emotion...Excellent!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Well done Luke, you are talented. Keep writing and I will keep reading.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Deep, sorrowful and angry... Another brilliant write!! You're doing really well now, first you discover this style and produce some great poems, now you have mastered it and are creating some wonderful poems!!

  • 18 years ago

    by xXx Expecting xXx

    Thanx.......yeah.....we do....hope to talk more

    xoxo
    wb
    elissa

  • 18 years ago

    by xXx Expecting xXx

    This is a realy good poem.....i read it while listening to hte cha cha slide...u should feel special cuz im dancing lol...

    i love this poem.

    comment back

    xxo
    elisas

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