Slit throat

by Watchmeburn   Mar 8, 2006


Slit my throat,
Open it up,
Listen to words gurgling out,
To you this is my roaring shout.

Drill through my skull,
And open it up,
Watch the eyes bleeding,
My taunts watching and pleading.

A gentle kiss,
From the bullets,
That sleep in your voice,
A tragedy in your choice.

May you pass,
Through the bullets,
Your heart leaks on the floor,
Lacerated face evermore.

Speak your name,
For all I care,
A mouthful of blades,
An inflamed body invades.

Spit on me,
For all I care,
It feels damn good upon my skin,
I breathe slowly and it sinks within.

Our fingers locked,
Well,congratulations,
To you and your phallic embrace,
Thrusted out of grace.

Crushing me,
So, congratulations,
Who's hand grips who,
Me on you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by aliiiii

    I liked this poem, the rhyming was kinda different, I've never seen somebody write like that. But it was cool. Thanks for commenting again. I was just going through all the comments and I found yours. So thanks, and keep up the good writes! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Thats really different, unique rhyme pattern, excellent vocab, a few lines dont seem consistent but I really like it. It has alot of potential.

  • 18 years ago

    by Monique

    Hey,
    first of all I would like to tahnk you for the comment on my poem. Now getting to this poem.. angry.. filled with angst, i loved it. the rhyme pattern was good, and well thoguth out. my fav stanza..
    A gentle kiss,
    From the bullets,
    That sleep in your voice,
    A tragedy in your choice.
    great choice of wrods. keep writing
    Monique

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Wow that was great, personally not my favourite writing style but I liked it. Good vocab and rhyme combination couple of things Id do like checking grammar but overall a great piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by Azure :)

    I can feel your pain and anger. i am sorry. i hope things get better. god bless and really well writen * xxx

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