Good one (as ususal!!!!). just one thing - the poem starts so beautifully, it's poetic and carries you along as you read. the only thing i found odd is:

"The worst part of it is"
That those who dont realise

- that first sentence of the last stanza seems more colloquial than the rest of the poem.

however, the manner in which you have portrayed reality really stands out!

will come back to read more of urs

good luck and peace
shobhana