Wow amazing very romantic and very expressive. your emotion is so good keep on writing and thanks for sharing this great poet.

I cn tell dis poem came from the depth of ur heart.gud write

I cn tell dis poem came from the depth of ur heart.gud write

I cn tell dis poem came from the depth of ur heart.gud write

I cn tell dis poem came from the depth of ur heart.gud write

There is this quote, I don't know by whom but here it goes:

"Relationships Last Long Because
Two People Make A Choice:
To Keep It,
Fight For It,
And Work For It"

Its sad when we love someone and they don't love us back. But sometimes is for the better, It was just destiny.

I like your poem. I like the rhymes in the first sentences. and overall I like the ending for it shows that you are deeply in love. A love that expects nothing in return even if you still want her to be with you.

You're absolutely right. Though forever is such a long time, but when you feel so deeply about someone you never just stop caring about the person and a part of you probably never stops hoping that one day maybe you'll be able to return to the way things used to be with them - and you captured that all very well. It's quite a vulnerable feeling, huh? I thought this line was really cute:

I'd hate to see you turn your back,
On the greatest love there can be,
I know it's the greatest,
Because it's between you and me.

Nice/ sad poem

Roses are red,
And Rose is in my head.

^this was cute and made me laugh :] aww!
great wording
when your truly in love forever never ends :]<3