by Juls
Long but well done I like it alot. Keep on writing, great work. |
Congrats, you won the first place in my competition with this amazingly written poem! Excellent |
by Emma
Wow. this is powerful and sad. It really makes you think. and I know how weird this is...but it makes me think of Harry Potter nd the Prisoner of Azkaban. lol. cause of Lupin...and yeah. you get it. lol. excellent poem though! |
by Fallen~Tears
Wow great job.. It had a very powerful effect.. I loved it 5/5 |
by PS
This was great. it pulled me into the story. its well written and the flow is great. i love. its sad..idk..its awesome. great job! |
by Lilly
This is a really excellent poem! it's all the more interesting because its a new subject...very refreshing. you describe the werewolf's being wonderfully! 5/5 |
Oooh, very well written, very powerful. i love it. really kool : ) |
Good job!!! I liked it. It was a little to long for me though!! Unique topic!!! 5/5!!! Keep it up!!! |
Aww that's so sad yet so AWsome! I loved it... a GREAT poem of yours... Such a story! Though this should be under 'dark' poems...Great job! |
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this is so good! I loved the ending. |
Wow. So much...killing lol. Very dark poem, yes. Great flow and rhymes though. I liked how you described about all the feelings you would feel (if werewolves were real) and how regretful you would be. Great write! =) 5/5 xoxo |
by Megann Lee
Wow. I loved this poem. I am a huge fan of Dark poems and yours was absolutely amazing. I enjoyed it very much. Great Write. |
by Esther
This poe is amazing!! I really liked it! by the way did you know that this poem got you 2nd place? in my compition? |
by Naima
GRETA POEM! I like it! |
by ŘÅÇĦ♥
Oh my goodness. I LOVE this poem. It's the best one I have read in FOREVER. You have a lot of talent the only thing I see to fix is puncuation marks. take it to a teacher(if your in school) english of course. or someone who is good at editting. |
I love this poem. It really is like all those movies you see about werewolves. But those stories are foolish. Yours is great not like the others. |
by Krysten
Wow, that was exelennt i could imagine perfectly every scean. really good. just one little question though cuz i notiieced it why did he jump through the window after slaming into the door...lol just wondering Great read hope to read more like it soon...5/5 |
That was asomeness >< ^^ I love werewolfs, great wording 5/5 |
by Kenny
This was awfully sad, really, if this was real. . you get my sympathy. . lol, by the way, a superb poetic story. . Great |
This has always been my favorite of your poems its so awesome extremelly awesome |