Dying From A Lonely Heart

by Anthony Vasconez   Mar 8, 2006


As I Looked within the tear thats falls from the sadden eye,
I saw life fading in forms of tears as you cried,
With tears of hate that rolled down your pale lonely face,
You had thoughts of giving up life and human race.

As then the eye formed an uncontrollable tear,
You cried out loud and scared for someone just to hear,
And with no one there to hear the cry of your pain,
Your drained face started to hurt from crying insane.

Without a friend in the world for you look up too,
Those sadden eyes become closed from feeling so blue,
Finally giving up and shedding one last tear,
A lonely heart has been lost hidden within fear.

Now I talk to you as you lye there deep within,
Hating myself when all you needed was a friend,
If I only knew now what i didn't know then,
You would still be alive rather having to end.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Monique

    :( aww hun. this poem is so sad. Its very well written and I loved it.
    Without a friend in the world for you look up too,
    Those sadden eyes become closed from feeling so blue,
    Finally giving up and shedding one last tear,
    A lonely heart has been lost hidden within fear
    I love that stanza, very well expressed. keep on writing, you have talent.
    if you could please read and comment on some of mine please, preferably a poem called Insecurity.
    thanks hun.
    Monique