:( aww hun. this poem is so sad. Its very well written and I loved it.
Without a friend in the world for you look up too,
Those sadden eyes become closed from feeling so blue,
Finally giving up and shedding one last tear,
A lonely heart has been lost hidden within fear
I love that stanza, very well expressed. keep on writing, you have talent.
if you could please read and comment on some of mine please, preferably a poem called Insecurity.
thanks hun.
Monique