by David Marshall Mar 8, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Shot with an arrow, |
Tragic, beautiful, full of expressive love and despair. Excellent poem, very well written. |
by Derf K
The title and the text went together well. |
Awesome Poem, if it was a little long it would be better. overall I loved it. 5/5 |
by Daze
This poem was good, although, i wish you would of kept going, maybe added more words to the story you were telling, overall good poem, i like to read poems from a guys perspective of things, although this poem could use more emotion, it was good and you did a good job |