This poem was good, although, i wish you would of kept going, maybe added more words to the story you were telling, overall good poem, i like to read poems from a guys perspective of things, although this poem could use more emotion, it was good and you did a good job

Awesome Poem, if it was a little long it would be better. overall I loved it. 5/5

The title and the text went together well.
It would be difficult to be un-moved while experiencing this poem.
Your use of words is impressive.

Tragic, beautiful, full of expressive love and despair. Excellent poem, very well written.