When I'm gone

by David Marshall   Mar 8, 2006


When I'm gone,
Will you shed a tear?
When I'm gone,
is it a tragedy you hear?
When I'm gone,
would you care?
When I'm gone,
when I disappear,
Is it something you would fear?
When I'm gone,
Will you cry?
When I'm gone,
and fade and die.
When I'm gone,
will you remember?
Before I'm gone,
can I hold you in my arms?
Before I'm gone,
can I have one last kiss?
When I'm gone,
will I be some one to miss?
What will you do?
What will you think?
How will you feel?
When my life is done,
When I'm gone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Whisper

    Aww..Well I'll miss you, you should know that. You won't leave me now will you? Well I thought the poem was amazing (what else is new?) and if something ever happens to you I'll be devastated...Luvs!

    Casey J

  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Extraordinary write...I ask myself these questions all the time....this poem was so full of emotion...i loved it 5/5
    love,
    steph*xthesetearsfalldownlikerainx*

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Those are good question.....I wonder about that too....very well written!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Ahhh..Very good. I liked, things I wonder asweel, about when "I am Gone.." Heh..Still.. I loved it.

    Also Yeah, the thing messed up. I'll fix it thanks for pointing it out.

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Awesome Poem, I loved it. The questions where cool, I like your style.

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