Holy crap girls, this poem rocks! What an awesome message and so beautifully conveyed! A very powerful write, WOW!

Wow never stop writing

Adore this poem, it's so sad though. i can't even imagine what it would feel like to be in a situation like this. it would be scary and confusing. great poem, it's hard to imagine women living in this situation and yet they stay everyday.

~Jacklyn

Hey your poem was awsome! There's nothing much more i can say. I'm just speechless. WoW!

You're poems are cool you should read mine

Really well writen you are a talented writer, plz read my poems if you can and your poem is really meaning full, god bless * xxx

Wow awesome work girls yous should write some more this was excellent and good to read.....its great how u showed two sides to the story

allana
xoxo

Hey, you guyz did a good job, it really captured how one would feel and everything, keep it up and take care..hope u guyz did well for the challenge
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Wow-the emotion and message of this poem is amazing!It is filled with violence and rage and so, so sad.Abuse/domestic violence is such a tragedy and it is conveyed so excellently in this poem.The poem flows so smooth and one is so caught up in the message and emotion that the rhyme while there, is such a smooth part of the flow it blends in perfectly, not drawing attention but enhancing the message and emotion in a more subtle aspect.This is a powerful poem and a strong statement.Excellent.

I like this poem, since it really has happened to some people...

Incredible. it's great because it shows the emtions and thoughts of both people. It takes talent to do that.

It was awesome...i love th srt of poems where one stanza is ons side nd th nxt is frm anthr side nd so on..good one