by Bertha Mar 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
My heart belongs to someone else |
by Megann Lee
I thought it was cute, and sad at the same time, and the flow was rather good, but as Kaylee said you did repeat alot. But other then that it was good. |
by Kaylee
It's a pretty good poem but you keep repeating that you love someone else, twice in fact in the first stanza alone, I would sugget maybe just limititing it a bit to reenforce the idea but have it not play off as a tad bit too much. |
by Macy
Aww wow i think this is really good and really cute. i hope things will look out for you. |
I'm so sorry. Love is an amazing f*u*c*k*e*d* up thing. You seem like an amazing person and I hope you can get through this. I'm always here if you need to just vent. Ask Emma...she knows. And she can give you my address! |
I know what u mean lady! |