So vivid, i can actually see the images in my mind.
great work!!
shobhana

Amazing dark write (Yet again)... You've really got it down with this dark writing!! This oozed pain, anger, hate and a little bit of "sock it to him"... Loved it Bill, loved it!

Bill you have out done yourself with this one. I must say this is very good. One of the best I would have to say. This is much like a horror story, intense and morbid. Ohhh, it sent shivers down my spine all the way through. I loved it. I really do miss you work!

Ooooooooo! I absolutely love it!! It keeps a person held in suspense, and with each passing moment adrenaline rushes more and more to your brain until...resolution. Exciting! Excellent work.

hugs and smiles,
Mary

It kept me guessing and i wanted to just skip to the last paragraph just to see what happened. Good work.

Kayz

Excellent.........fantastic......
i loved reading it
Bharti

Wow

So powerful and just awesome. The suspense and intensity to this poem is simply amazing. I found myself holding my breath and reading even quicker.. Love it!

Wow, this was a very interestinbg poem. 5/5.

A really amazing dark write it made my hair stand on its ends and gave me goosebumps.... great going.....keep churning out the dark stuff dude.

Wow, amazing. It was ; I'm speechless. You show lots of promise as a poet! Very, very deep. Exactly as the people would like to read. I hope you ahve more works of art coming soon!

Incredible, amazing, unbelievable.. these are the 3 words that came to my mind after reading this poem, your an incredible writer the story lines you come up with are amazing and its unbelievable that you could possibly top your other ones, but you did...good work :D! im a huge fan of your stuff and your a huge inspiration
cya!

This was a great poem I loved the way
you made it seem so real! Keep it up!!

Wow. this is awesome. its great that you can tell such dark things the way you do. keep it that way. dark poetry is a great way to get urself through, especially with your talent. i love it!

Wow that was extreamly good kinda reminds me of some of my poems... anyhow you did a really good job I didnt expect to end like that, good work, I might cheak out some more of your work if u want

THIS POEM WAS JUST LIKE WOOOH! IT WAS FULL OF SUSPENCE AND DETAILED I LOVE YOUR WORK KEEP IT UP! SERIOUSLY WICKED!

Makes me think you actually went through that.