Hypnotized

by X2892   Mar 9, 2006


How could i have not seen it
just took me a little bit.
To have realized how much
you have touch
my mind and heart.
You took me apart
poisoned my mind,soul,and heart.

Just looking deep inside ya eyes
took me to another world full of lies.
Believing everything you told me,
telling me how much you loved me.

Looking at ya beauty
sipping on a smoothie
thinking that you love me.

Must erase you out of my mind
and leave you behind.
But my heart tells me something else
I cant believe i let you go.
Actually i do believe it.

Copyright © Paul Salazar

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  • 18 years ago

    by catherine

    It was good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marcus

    That was nice I loved the flow of it

    5.5

    Marcus

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Great poem, your really tallented... i think maybe u could do something more with it... but its still awsome! well done

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    That poem was really nice, it was full of raw emotion..the flow was kindof off since you had a different number of lines in each stanza and the sentences were split up. All together it was a pleasant read.:)

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Poisoned my mind,soul,and heart.
    ((I loved these lines..))
    Just looking deep inside ya eyes
    ((Your..))
    Looking at ya beauty
    sipping on a smoothie
    ((your beauty..
    And please..Smoothie? My goodness..))

    This is alright. In my opinion, no one can write the perfect love poem for no one can explain love. However, you did try and had some very good moments in the poem. So, nice job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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