Well done, this is a very wel written poem. This reminds me of a Bob Dylan style poem. I am very much inspired by him. Thank you for this read.

I was thinking the same as Darien... Only I'm not inspired by Bob so much. Great write Tim, you never cease to impress me with your wonderfully chosen words :)

Love it! Such sad truths you so beautifully convey.
"Young girls plan
Fairy tale weddings
That end in terror"
^^^ Love these lines, so true! Great job!

Hey Tim great write.My fav lines were
Children cower in
Closets crying for
Lost innocence

said alot to me!
good read
ainz

Wow dis was so gwd....love dia mwaz oxox
u got talent....

This is good, I like the way you write your poems. It's formed in a different way than most, and the truth is not blantly obvious, I had to think about it for a while, and of course..you want people thinking right? Anyways, great poem, once again awesome imagery. You are also going in my favo(u)rites. I'm Canadian too.