This is like an epic poem! its really beautiful and full of truths abt life, you definitely been having loads of deep thoughts eh! This is a good poem for ppl 2 read when they r feeling thoughtful or philosophical.

Your poem was awesome! I loved and i can relate to it well some parts but keep up the good work and thanx for the comment!

Wow. That's deep. GREAT job!! Ottimia!! hehe...I'm working on my Italian. =) Well. Ciao!

Great job:) wise words spoken. keep it up

Wow. Now, this poem is just perfect. It's great and holds attention all the way through and shows both sides of the situation. There's not a single thing I'd change on this. And all the beautiful lines! Ah, *jealousy*

Great poem 5/5

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