Well, this is the last of yours for today. I must say, I did have fun reading. I will most likely be back to finish reading any other poems you have. This was a very good poem. I must say I liked your style. Beat poetry is my favourite, I have yet to write any, but one day I'll have my Bob Dylan playing and I will be writing. My stuff is just angst teenage poetry. Thanks for the great reads :)

Another awesome division of creativity! Your talent extends further than I could have even imagined. A great meaningful poem this is :)

WOW! The title caught my attention and I had to read it. It was defonotely worth it because this poem is amazing. Creative genius!

Tim
Enjoyed this one alot. Very well done.

Love Ann

Your poems are awesome. They have such awesome imagery, and so many hidden meanings.

Damn you, I will be thinking about this poem all day.

Great job.