I loved this poem great job keep def got my 5 vote writing take care sarah x

5/5.......i wish there was an answer to questions in life.......hope u feel beta.....wonderful poem.....takecare

sonam

Hey darl a t0uching piece l0t 0f em0ti0n. heartfelt and p0werful lines. g0od j0b. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me!

l0ve always d0ra

Well, first of all I would like to thank you for commenting on my poems, you are so sweet. now getting to this poem.. wonderful, I love it. and yes its soo true, we as women expect too much.. and when we dont get what we expected, we blow it way out of proportion and hurt ourselves. so technically we shouldnt blame men when we are hurt but ourselves since it was partly out fault for expecting too much.
well, thanks again for the comments.
Monique

Xellent poem indeed dear, great theme and i totally agree with whetever you said here, though i think that womens do deserve to expect so much as they do more than that too but then mostly expectations are never met and thats the worst part.

well, great poem, nicely penned and great theme.

all the best and take care

Wow, filled with emotion. This Poem is very powerful. I loved it. Keep up the awesome work.

Yes . . . and the more you expect that doesn't happen, the more hurt you get. Which is why I always expect the worst. . . The flow was great, and the rhyming was really great as well. Beautiful work, well done.

Peace. [Sole]