Its amazing how ur thoughts and feelings flow in hindi...This one too was very nicely written...
you know,one should live for themselves first...and when you are dedicated to your life,others too will get involved with your life and you will no longer feel lonely or miss anyone....
take care and keep smiling always,
may god blesss you...

Saanso me aaj bhi khushboo teri hi basti hai,
ab ye zindagi mujhe meri nahi teri si lagti hai...

very beautiful lines...........

ranju

Wow i enjoyed readin every lil bit of this. i love the lines and words u used....its simply beautiful......5/5

sonam

Heyy bharati ,

tum itni pyaari shayari kavita likhti ho . Tumhare khayalaat bahut khoobsurti hai labzon mein bayaan karti ho.
ab ye zindagi mujhe meri nahi teri si lagti hai...
beautiful line ...

take care
chavii.

Wow, Hindi poem on the top page of the Love Poems Category, well this is really remarkable, i am so glad to see you reaching here...this is something to feel proud of my dear, u r really an amazing writer & i am so glad for you.

now this is really a great poem, u really xpressed ur emotions and love beautifully.

all the best and take care