Take me

by sarah   Mar 9, 2006


Take me please to that
better life.
Take me from all this
pain and strife.

You took my boyfriend
you took my mum
Now look at what I have
become.

You took them so why not
me,
You do not take me although
I scream and plea.

As long as you take me I
do not care how.
All I do ask is you take me now.

My loved ones with, I will forever be.
Take me there so I can be with them endlessly.

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  • 18 years ago

    by MethodtotheMadness

    This is really good. I'm sorry for all that has happened to you but I just wanted to say thank you for all the comments you wrote me, they really brighten my day.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Tiernan

    Wow hun that was really good i cant possibly understand how hard that would be if i lost ppl that important to me that was great and keep it up xx
    *~*Hannah Tiernan*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    I really love this poem of yours, it just really strikes me and it's so heartfelt. thanks for commenting on my poem x

  • 18 years ago

    by ArWenBlacK

    Thx 4 ur comment... u write very good 2..... really... do u know we have the same name???? saraH (very important the "H"!!!) !!!
    but however....
    It's a very sad poem... i'll never b able 2 write like u, because... i'm italian.... but i still hope that 1 day i will....
    xxxxx
    ArWenBlacK

  • 18 years ago

    by Cameron Paiz

    Thank you for the comment on my poem, I also really enjoyed reading your poems, especially this one. 5/5

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