Shadow's of my Failures

by Cody   Mar 9, 2006


Shadow's of my failures give chase
This is a cruel race
One that I can't win
I guess this is the end

I remember all the times I lost
It chills me heralding the coming frost
My soul will freeze
I will cease to be me
Everything I know will cease to be
I will cease to see

And my heart bleeds
It feeds
the snow
That becomes redder blow by blow

I battle my failures
my personal jailers
Locked inside my mind
Pain is all I find

I can't run anymore
Yet instead of falling to the floor
I turn to my darkness
look in to my losses
I face my pain
Knowing it will drive me insane

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  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    I really like this poem Cody...i love the words you used....thank you for commenting on my poem it ment alot..oh yeah..The FishBowl Rocks!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow! thats an amazing poem! uv expressed ur feelings perfectly thru the words. 5/5, i loved it!
    xxEmmaxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    "i face my pain,
    Knowing that it will drive me insane"..
    OMG^^
    i can't believe how much i relate to those lines, how much i feel that.
    Really nice poem.
    A little tip..open your blinds..enjoy light?
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bexx

    I like this... it portrays your emotion. I believe you have talent.

  • 18 years ago

    by Violet

    Hey, nice poem. I really like your poems. they are also very true and really descriptive. Thanks for commenting on mine. i really appreciate that. anyways, keep up the good work.

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