This is relaly really good...i like it alot...u have talent whether u believe it or not.....hope to talk more sometime.....im always on everyother weekend and from 1130am till 135pm while im n 3rd bl.....

keep it up

love,
elissa

I know how u feel it be in your own darkness and to feel like there is no way out and to if alone in this world its hard to ever get over that feel but wirting always helps for me keep up the good work :)
xoxo robyn

I added u to my fav's also....eyah.....i love ur writing to im not n to a lof of nonryhming poems but i write it and i like yours....yeah.....i may b n da chat room thi weekend but now while im n school cuz its blocked but yeah...hope to talk bmore on here....lol...xoxo
elissa

ps..where in NC u from?

Wow, that's good, I liked it, strong stuff... sounds like you need a big hug!! Wish I could giv eyou one. Well I'm going to Florida over spring break:) I'm staying a night in South Carolina with a friend of my mom's. Well great poem... good stuff... try to be happier:)

Hey, nice poem. I really like your poems. they are also very true and really descriptive. Thanks for commenting on mine. i really appreciate that. anyways, keep up the good work.

I like this... it portrays your emotion. I believe you have talent.

"i face my pain,
Knowing that it will drive me insane"..
OMG^^
i can't believe how much i relate to those lines, how much i feel that.
Really nice poem.
A little tip..open your blinds..enjoy light?
xxxxx

Wow! thats an amazing poem! uv expressed ur feelings perfectly thru the words. 5/5, i loved it!
xxEmmaxxx

I really like this poem Cody...i love the words you used....thank you for commenting on my poem it ment alot..oh yeah..The FishBowl Rocks!!!!