by Taylor Mar 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Only knowing what is right |
by Danielle
I like it.. try to do longer next time... but i like how u write.. and how u put ur heart and soul into it.. put more emotion!! but great job... 5/5 |
by Angie
Hmm, this is a well written poem, you have a good use of vocab. Its short, too the point with a touch or mystery. I like it. The onlt thing i would suggest it that you add punctuation. It'll help the reader understand you poem better. Other then that nice, keep it up! |