Hmm, this is a well written poem, you have a good use of vocab. Its short, too the point with a touch or mystery. I like it. The onlt thing i would suggest it that you add punctuation. It'll help the reader understand you poem better. Other then that nice, keep it up!
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~Angie~
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I like it.. try to do longer next time... but i like how u write.. and how u put ur heart and soul into it.. put more emotion!! but great job... 5/5