My Childhood

by lonelynow   Mar 9, 2006


*This poem is about my childhood, before the depression, during those few happy years before..well..everything*

I used to know a place
Where friendships grew on trees
And everyone could sing
And laughter danced through the breeze

Everyone could smile
With nothing to hold them back
And everyone was smart enough
There was nothing I could lack

I used to know a place
Where friendships lasted years
And no one had hard choices
And I learnt to smile through tears

Nobody could hit out
Harm themselves or others
Have depression or cry
Hate their fathers or their mothers

I used to know a place
Where there was no fashion
Or bullying or violence
There was only love, and passion

Everyone knew that they were perfect
And that they didn't need to lose weight
And we were thin anyway
Life was happy, life was great

I used to know a place
Where there was nothing bad
No rape, murder or hurt
And we loved what we had

So take me back to that place
Oh take me there please
I want to sing with my friends
And laugh through the breeze

*please comment, it would mean a lot, and i always return the favor xx*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Great poem...you can really se eimages in your head when you read this, oit's really good, keep up the great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    It looks like that life isn't fair for you now well hun look at it, it's your fault it's not fair for you because your the one who made it what it is today not anyone else. Your the one who wanted to go into another path like your poem says you want to be happy again and stuff well hun you can be but your not trying to be. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forver.

  • 18 years ago

    by SpecialAngel55

    I liked that poem! when your a kid you seem to think about the good things like puppys nad ice cream.But when we get older it's rape, murder, nothing good we change our views and get depressed! I liked it a lot!! very good5/5!!
    Whitetiger

  • Hey good poem!! I really liked it!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Hey that poem was relly good. n thnx for the comment u gave me