Hey that poem was relly good. n thnx for the comment u gave me

Hey good poem!! I really liked it!! :)

I liked that poem! when your a kid you seem to think about the good things like puppys nad ice cream.But when we get older it's rape, murder, nothing good we change our views and get depressed! I liked it a lot!! very good5/5!!
Whitetiger

It looks like that life isn't fair for you now well hun look at it, it's your fault it's not fair for you because your the one who made it what it is today not anyone else. Your the one who wanted to go into another path like your poem says you want to be happy again and stuff well hun you can be but your not trying to be. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forver.

Great poem...you can really se eimages in your head when you read this, oit's really good, keep up the great work!