Comments : My Heart Takes Flight

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    Awesome

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    This was such a sweet and beautiful poem. Loved the flow! Awesome job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awwww That was so cute! 5/5 cause its cute =]

    - natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by dReAMeRgRL18

    Beautifully written!

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    I like the flow of this... great write! Keep writing...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    The 3 months block was well worth it! great poem; good imagery, excellent flow and a nice message :)

    xx

  • Please keep up your gorgeous work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ForeverGoneInYourEyes

    Yes

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow!! this was beautiful, yer a great great writer!!
    i loved every word of this poem, it was so lovely.

    There you are, a sight to see,
    I embrace you tight, you kiss me.
    So long waiting for this day,
    For if I'm dreaming, I want to stay

    but i must say this stanza was my favorite line.
    job well done!
    5/5.