Hey there,
FIrst of all I would like to thank you for commenting on my poem.:) Thanks you for the critisism. Now coming to your piece of writing. I love it, How old are you now? Hm... well the poem was heartfelt and id have to say my fav. stanza was..
But either or, I will keep my head held high
And let nothing bother me as I hiding a lie
On missing or wanting that special guy
And not wanting my heart and sole to die
its beautiful.. I really have nothing negative to say about this piece of writing.:) 5/5 for sure..

I really enjoyed this poem....keep up the good work..i think i will add u to my favorites!!! maybe u could read some of my poems sometime n tell em what you think!!!