This Place

by Brytnie   Mar 9, 2006


All alone in this world
this world of hate and anger

What does this world have to offer?
What does it have to show me?

If America is so wonderful then
Why are there people killing one another?

Why is there so much crime?
People don't treat you like you matter...

No one knows and understands
the pain that I am going through...

No one understands that I am all alone and very very sad

They say I will meet people...
They say I will have friends...
7months have gone by and
I am still all alone

No friends
No one to talk to
No one to share my feelings with
Just all alone

I hate this place this place
This place they call
PARADISE

All I can say is forget Hawaii
I hate it here....
I hate this place
I want to go home

Home to where I belong...

I will be going home soon
but to me not soon enough

All I know is when I get out
of this Hell Hole
I will be VERY VERY VERY HAPPY

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Good Job! I gave you 4/5 just because I feel like there could be more to this poem, more deeper meaning to it and feeling which would make it a better! Keep up the good work!

    -Steph-