OMG! that was....
ops, very great piece!
I just duno what to say
**No matter how jealous I get
I still continue to hide.**

I luv this part the most
I'm unable to say more!
you've amazed me with beauty of poetry!
Keep it up
Yours
x0x0x0x0x

Wow! This was wonderful! Long but easy to keep reading because it was so interesting throughout! Very powerful, and emotional. I especially loved the lines:

"I stow away all my feelings
Keep them locked up deep inside
No matter how jealous I get
I still continue to hide."

Beautiful. No critisim from me. Keep up the awesome work!

--Angie xoxo

Aw. Very beautiful. You really get this message through to who ever you are trying to. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you very much for the comments they mean alot to me. 5/5

God Bless,
Taylor

Good job! This was a very nice poem. It was filled with strong and deep emotions, but the flow was a little rocky. Also in stanza four the line reads: I store away all my feelings,
But in the seventh stanza the line reads: I stow away all my feelings

So you can see where the mix up is you might want to fix it, other then that I say great job and keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. 4/5

Best wishes
Letty