A very interesting poem ben! i've never read on like it. congrats. not a topic most ppl would talk about. smashing job!! good on you!!
keep it up huny
ruthie xoxo

Aye i've neva read anything lyk dis as well...but i enjoed it.....i lvoed dis line for sum reason
but nothing can kill the glorious song, the sounds of hope and kind...hehe
lvoe dia mwaz xoxo

That was cool...Nothing ive ever really read before! Im going to read some of your other poems...If you would like..You could check out my poetry..Probably not as good as yours but I have a few favorites lol..Thanks! and Great Job! :)

Hey Ben, its Shannon.
Lol ur probably wondering who I am rite?
Anyways, I talk to u on msn sometimes lol and you told me this poem when you had written it.
I actually just made myself an account on here - obviously haha.
Just wanted to comment on your writing. It's great and I loved this poem keke.
Keep up the great work!!!!
p.s thnx for tht msn name u gave me tht time!! >_<
sHaNz x0x...mWarKs...x0x

Hey Ben! :D my name's kestrel. Loved your poem, it's amazing, so original. You painted the picture for me so clearly. keep up the great work!!!