by Heather Mar 10, 2006
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
The sun was beginning to set |
by Kelsey
I liked your poem as well! thank you for the comment! its been so long since i actually got someone to rate my poems! thanks !! |
by Juls
Wow thats wonderful. My dad was in the navy and now knowing all his navy buddies and hearing the stories of visiting the ones that have died this poem really touched me. Keep writing your great at expressing deep emotions. |