To The People Of This Site

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Mar 10, 2006


After over a year of discovering this site,
My life has drastically changed.
Reading what I wrote only months ago,
I realize that I no longer am the same person.

I used to hide behind my mask
And disguise a deep dark part of myself.
No one ever saw what I felt inside,
That void that lingered within.

Poetry has helped me chase away
The inner demons that chained me.
It has helped me get rid
Of the rage I kept inside.

Today, I need to thank all of you;
Every one person who commented.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Writing was one of my ways of escaping reality,
And to know that it is appreciated
Still leaves me speechless to this day.

When I entered this site,
All I wanted was to get critiqued.
I wanted to know how to improve.

I never expected to be here today,
A completely different person.
I never expected to have received
The amazing comments you have left for me.

Looking back at this year,
I finally see the journey I have made.
Through poetry, I transformed myself;
The raging and melancholic adolescent
Became peaceful and genuinely happy.

I started out as a girl
That simply wanted to get critiqued.
I started out as a girl
That simply needed to be heard.

Yet, I ended up as someone
Who continues to wonder if this is all a dream...
Thank you to every single person
Who has ever commented on my poems.
It means the world to me.
Thank you.

*and expecially thank you to everyone who had added me to their favorites. Thank you soo much. peace.

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  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Well, i have been through the same, i could relate myself very much with every word. Great work indeed.

    All the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by :::...BaBeE.cHiCa...:::

    Yea thats so true like i've alwayz writen poems but reading other ppls poems i can realli relate as that inner demon in me has been unchained and i feel free and less confussed cuz i understand more of myself

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    So true..you expressed what this site does for so many of us so well.
    I feel exactly the same, it's amazing.
    Im glad that this site and the people who have supported you have made you into the happier person you are today, that is definately a positive glow:P
    I hope we continure the tradition!
    Much love oxox

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    * i'm glad i found * xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Sweet poem hun and i know what you mean the support on this site is amazing and i found this and talented caring people like you xxxx