Without the fuel

by Juls   Mar 10, 2006


Resists herself from the fuel she needs
She seeks an image nobody sees
Wanting to be that perfect girl
She makes sure she doesn't eat

The smell of food makes her sick
She wishes just wishes
That she could be that girl
that girl who looks like a stick

Too weak to even wake up
So she falls to the ground
She doesn't give up
Still fixing the imperfection she see

Counts how many hours since her last meal
One hour
than two
seems so long she try to eat
By now its a week later, she thinks its too late

Fine she says, so I lost a few pounds
Its wouldn't hurt me
I'll gain back a few
In a day or two

Well the story now is she never
gained back any weight
You can now she her ribs
Its disgusting to some
But this is her fate

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  • 18 years ago

    by †Undone♥

    This is soo good. You should keep writng.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    A horrible image painted in people's imagination by a few words. That's nothing bad. IN fact that just means you had good word choice, a great maessage to send to people, and a hint of talent at maybe getting the truth out there. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    WOW i can relate to this poem tho i havent reached my goal n i love the way u wrote about being anorexic it just draws ur readers attention

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...that describes being anorexic perfectly. great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw wow. This is sad. I pray to god this isnt about you though. Great work though 5/5 I really liked it!

    - natz x0x