I'll Sing My Tears

You bring up alot of good points in this poem, the sins and broken heart... finding the wrong way so much easier to take
i also liked the last line of your poem, it was the line that convinced me to comment on this poem
i dont know why but it really "spoke to me" i guess i felt like i could really relate
so overall i think that this is a really good poem, and good job

Very well written and effectibve use of vocab

So sad, but so beautifully written! Awesome job on this poem!