I liked it, easy to read also meaningful...well done

Very nice. you have a really original style, that i find very interesting. i like this one alot.

Ruby

The rhyming is perfect. flow is fantastic. rock on
-Snoo
xox

Very nice. Your words were so powerful as was your originality. Beautiful.

Yea this sounds kinda familiar 4 me...loved it, like usual. u have a real gift