Nicely done, I am so sorry for your loss.

It's good, thanks for commenting on my poems

Omg i absolutely love this poem....
how do u really get words like this??? i try to rite but i cant rhyme it and cant express properly how i feell..... it just all turns out to be rong in the end....

This touched me. its amazing to see people with so much talent. And you my friend,have talent. I like how you form emotion. Keep writing. 5/5
Kat