by Kaylee Mar 10, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I always seem to lose my place/ |
by Bret Higgins
There is a massive fluctuation in syllable count from line to line. I would be intrigued to learn how you intend to resolve this with the tune. |
by Sole
In contrats - I prefer this one. It is more of a song, though it has real meaning within it - I especially like the beginning of the seconnd choruse - great work :) |
by Loulou
This one is ok i like the other one better though great job keep it up! |