Comments : Ouch

  • 18 years ago

    by Nyx

    Hey dez this is gooooooood i like i like
    "smiles defeat" -nice i can see what u imagined.

  • 16 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    Hey,

    This is my favourite. Its beautifully written & your rhyming is spot on. Keep it up!

    Ally. x