That seems like it would b a pretty song! ive tried writting songs a little, but im pretty bad at it! haha

I would love it if you checked out some of my poems and told me how well i did. that would b amazing

god bless

Taylor

This is great. Your a really good writer! hopefully one day i'll be hearing your songs on the radio =] hehe, There fantastic 5/5

natz x0x

I love this song, i find it very hard to write songs, i find poems easier. Very well written :)

Good poem or song or whatever you may call it... lol

P.S.
My poem, Where is The End? You put in one of your comments that my prayer was supposed to be my request. My request for an answer to that prayer which, if you go back in read, I didn't recieve one. Just though I'd tell you :)

Great work..I love it
Juls

This would be a great song excellent job

:) A beautiful song I look forward, like Natalie, to hearing this played one day :)

Peace. [Sole]

Wow, this was amazing. Awesome write, I got a great feeling for the regret described in the song. Once again, great job, and 5/5 for sure.

Wonderful, a song so well written.
Good job.