This is simply incredible. Nicely done!

When I first started this poem, I wondered how you were gonna make it circle back to "your eyes". I must say I'm impressed.
This is written with such passion, very nice.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Umm, I don't know how to critique rictameter's because I've never written one. great job.

Beautiful. Eyes can say so much, and your poem conveys that.

Your rictameters are absolutely brilliant!! Okay, all your poems are really. I have to admit that I was questioning how you would get back around to 'your eyes', but you did it so perfectly. This is some absolutely, completely out of this world amazing writing!!!

love and best wishes,
Mary

Beautifully written... You've mastered this form!

Very nicely done, great rictameter Melissa!!!