Beautifully done....I love the flow and scheme of this one. Great job!

Your love poems are so wonderful and your dark poems are so painful. My heart over flows with love when I read your love poems and my heart gets crushed when I read your dark poems. You know what that means, you are one heck of a writer girl!!! Keep it up.
Magnificent poem once again. I especially loved the first two lines.

Love and Best Wishes

So sad and heartfelt, but beautifully conveyed. The flow was perfect, great job!

A very nice piece Cuddles. I thought the ending was alright, the rest of the poem was so powerful, it took away from the ending. But it was still an excellent poem, the meaning and words you brought in, very good.

I really l0ved this poem and i no exactly h0w y0o feel, i h0pe everything works out, yea l0ve is really really heard and i do sumtimes wish i never did fall in love but then if i never had of i wouldnt have learnt all the things i have today and i wouldnt have all the memories...hold on babe, time does heal wounds, it could b years and u will look back on the memories y0o might still cry but it will help...im always here if y0o need 2 talk thru sum stuff...remember that...luv maddy xxx p.s thanx 4 the comment it meant a lot

Mmmm... sad and lonesome write. Beautifully written, with great flow :)

This is soo touching

I'm touched!!!
great job!!!!
wow! i loced it!

Wow, its an remarkable expereince i go through whenever i read ur poems and i love that a lot.

beautiful poem indeed.

all the best and take care

Wow, this is an incredible poem! very sad, and quite moving, i loved it :) thanku for ur comment, it meant a lot,
take care,
xxEmmaxxxx

Another superlative penn Mary, wonderful job!!!

So eloquently written. Really great work. I really did feel this so well. Brilliant work
Sondos

Wow great job and thanks for the comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a beautiful yet sad piece of poetry, Mary. I love the way you've used the words - the flow is perfect and the rhyme scheme is very nicely done.

congrats on getting this on the home page!

love and peace
shobhana

Brilliant work. I loved this so much. So sad =*(

Well done once again sweety

Lotsaaaaa love
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