Comments : Summers day(dedicated to hannah,my perfect,amazin gf!)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    Great Job..Nice Rhyme..My only suggestion would be to work on your flow a little better..its too much too squished u know what i mean..
    great job though
    and love your expression through it
    5/5 still
    ~TBOY~