Nice poem, a 5/5 with no doubt!
~*Katherine*~

Thats so sad, and emotional, i wish love and lust werent so confusing but thats life, its s'pose to suck

Heyy very good poem sorry aobut how u feel and everything but yeah that was a good poem and i really like how u write.

Hey, this is my second time commenting and reading this poem and its really touching, its a amazing write.

HOLY SMOKES!!

This poem is incredible, hun... wow. It's perfect in every way. The flow is flawless, and I loved the rhyme scheme. you're truly talented, so make sure to keep on writing!