I Thougth I Lost Him.....

by Suicide With A Smile   Mar 10, 2006


I don't know what went wrong
Its been so long
I thought I lost him
The light was so dim
Our love was getting grim
He almost started to despise me
Then, he remembered all of the times he lied to me
And he wanted to die
Then, he started to cry
He wanted to hide
But he just couldn't find it inside
He knew it wasn't fair
So, He decided to stop all the lies
And make new lives
For him and his new wife....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Suicide With A Smile

    Yes i really did love him alot... but he never changed.... but alot of happy endings on my poems it like my alternate reality for me... tha life i want to live..you knoe? well i'm glad you like my poems... i'm going to post some more here pretty soon!....i'll check out more of yours and give you tips...plz do the same! much love...

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    THAT IS REALLY RELLY GOOD.... i LIKE THAT ALOT. Yes mine are from the heart.... there true life expierences. Alot of them have to do with my dad, who's a heroin addict, or drugs.... I've changed but theres still deep scars so I let it out in poetry. So definitley check some of mine out. I'm really glad that guy straightened up, because it sounds like you really loved him.

  • 18 years ago

    by Suicide With A Smile

    Thank you! his new wife is the same girl! I made this poem orginally out of sarrow... but the end was a little bit of a twist for me cuz i'm on 14...the whole wife part. idk..but it a really good poem...i have more on the way!

  • 18 years ago

    by Suicide With A Smile

    It really touched me....who was his new wife was it the girl that he was with or a new girl?!?!? I hope you make more!

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