Aw this is good. Loved how you used to the word treasure, I've never seen that word in a poem, Ever. So great job 5/5

natz x-x-x

Ah i liked this alot its a very beautiful poem and i got it the first time i read it ^_^
5/5

A sad poem yet well-written, esp the 2nd & 3rd stanzas.

I've been feeling that way a lot..trying to find a place that's as carefree as that. 5/5

I think there might have been a typo or maybe i was intentional... "Peace to complicated", thought I'd point that out. Great write though... keep up the good work! Keep writing. 5/5

Wow this is a wonderful poem i love the words and the rhyming great job 5/5

love tabby

The last stanza makes such an impact :)
Great work.

Peace. [Sole]

Great poem, it's very sad and emotional, makes me feel different things at once. I loved it. Keep writing x

Beautiful sad penned, though sad but flowed well written, beautiful done.

I really enjoyed reading this...I loved the flow...nice job...Great Write
Emma 5/5

Very elevated imagery...this is pulchritudinous....!!

[lost_laureate - come find me]

Lies are no longer an issue
The truth is what you find
No more rage and hatred
Peace too complicated for the human mind

I really liked the words you used here..Great great job!!!!!

This was good too. Wasn't too short, Wasn't too long. The rhyming was good and so was the flow, Overall, I loved this one aswell. You're a really great writer. Don't ever stop! 5/5

`taleee xx

That was good! :) i loved the last stanza! its so cute.. hehe.. keep up the good work!

Aww. It's so sad =( I feel the same way sometimes. -sigh- Anyways, flow was good in most places, but was a bit rocky in some parts. Some lines were too long compared to others and some were too short. The vocab was excellently chosen out. Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I realy liked the poem.. It made me teary eyed kinda.. Not many things do that. The flow and structure was well also. I enjoyed it great job.

Very nice. I really liked the ending, it really pulled it together. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Aww.. this poem is really great.. the flow and rhyme are wonderful.. as well as the emotion behind it nice job!

Hahaha! GOOD job! on this poem! I enjoyed it! keep writting! well done! good choice of words!

Sin is not a fear here
[[I love this line with all my heart.]]

Lies are no longer an issue
The truth is what you find
No more rage and hatred
Peace too complicated for the human mind
[[Though in this sentence the first three lines contridict the last one...]]

Anyways.
I like this poem, but I felt you might have been able to say more. It felt unfinished to me. The fourth stanza should have had more after it and then the last stanza as the last stanza. Perhaps that's only me, but I felt it very unfinished.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5