Dark and deep... A really great poem you've created here. The fire's I can almost feel burning!!!

This is incredible! I love the rhyme, it really made the poem flow quite nicely. What a wonderful topic to write about, awesome job!

This is really good.i like the way the whole poem rhymes.

The ashes create a perfect tomb,
here they call the 'living' room

these lines are exceptionally well written.

good luck and peace
shobhana

Wow very dark and deep I loved this poem, great flow and ryme as well as fantastic imagry, well done my friend.
Tim

Superb write, beautiful flow and rhythm, nice and dark!!! ^_^ So happy to have met someone who can write so well, lol can't wait to see you again.

Hey D. Good job. I like this one. I haven't commented on your stuff for a while so I thought I might have a look around. So far so good :)

Smoke from buildings floating high,
as the people below start to cry.
Who knows how many will die,
firefighters stare into the fire's eye

Great use of imagery in that stanza Darien! When poems allow me to creat a picture in my head makes me want to read and read and read!! freakin Britt took the words right outta my mouth :P...I too enjoyed how you sad good will overcome evil..at least thats what I got out of it...it weird I picked this poem to read because as of the past month there has been so many apartment fires in my area! Great poem Dare! it was uber cool lol...that word!!
much love hun 5/5
chels

Awesome poem .I am going to check out some more of your stuff. Keep writing!!~
Tisha~

Nicely done! This is a powerful piece. Great job.

Ooh this is a good poem i definately liked readin it

Great work, congrats on being in the top ranked.. check mine out sometime and tell me what you think, I'd would very much appreciate it.. Sara

Good job, I don't think I could ryme that much

This is a really good poem. I dont noe if u did this purposly.. or if im just slow lol but it seems like u realted hell to 9/11 in a way.. i dunno

I like the sort of twist at the end..it was really good.
Nice poem..the flow was great and the vocab made it very easy to produce a complete image.
Well done
>torn -x.x.x-

Pretty good.............. nice.......

Wow, that was good. You may notbe interested in my poems, butthen again you may, so um... check out my page.

WOW, all I can say is wow

Absolutely beautiful, isn't it funny how every arsonist gets his (or her) wish in death if they live a pleasurable (in their opinion) life, weird huh? Anyway, "The ashes create a perfect tomb" my favourite line, stunning, ironic, perfect imagery throughout, your english teacher must love you! (even if i bet she does want to send you to a mental institution!) Brilliant poem! 5/5
Helen

Wow that was very deep and dark.. it was really good. The rhyming scheme was perfect and flowed very well. You had a great word choice on this and I love the way that you ended it. Great job on this! You did a really good job!

Really emotive use of imigary here it must have been tricky to get the four rhymes per stanza but you pulled it off very well. Only critisism is in stanza four line two it was a sylable or two out I think and also in stanza five line two same thing but still very good poem
another great piece of work!
Aaron (remo)